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Why not do something like this

Wow, thats really amazing work there Jatsko!

Though is always hard to me to have the presence of a real world government in the Submachine, but still excelent work.

I literally wrote the whole thing straight up in one go without proofreading, so if concepts are hard to grasp, I apologize. That's why I have this thread

I clearly get anything right, is very well writen!

I like it a lot

You have collaborated with Sublevel in the end, right? The subbots' names are familiar.

I just had trouble understanding 0600 at first. I'm used to hours and minutes being separate, like this 06:00.

cool stuff. I like it!

lol, who's Wormy and Cipher? And where's Ony?
because in my version, we are in basement, and Subby, Ony and Gemy stalk us.

Perhaps he wanted to make names related to Submachine. Subby is obvious, Gemmy from wisdom gem, Cipher from cipher plate, etc. I dunno about Wormy though.

@Sublevel I wanted to make sure you had your own characters to work with, considering you've been thinking of using them for some time now!

And as for Wormy, I've actually posted a picture of him here before...back when I made all those pen drawings.

Interesting... do you plan to add pictures to the story? Or will it be just writing?

yeah, pictures would be cool!

and sorry but it seems I forgot that image with wormy... where is it?

also: if you hear angry noises around - that's definitely Gemy. After Wisdom gem was stolen from him, he became angry and is making terrify noises around, before he gets you.
also, he can leave blood trails without killing people, because he's organic and his... viscera is open.
also: don't pull the switch
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