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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 12:05
by Vortex
Sublevel 102 wrote:No more items there?..

If so...

Ian: Carefully: exit the room, go to the corner of the edge of corridor, and peek what is to the right...
Ian exits his uncles' bedroom. He slowly goes forward, steel bar in one hand and flashlight on the other, each carefully measured step getting him closer and closer to the origin of the creaking sounds.

He stops at the corner of the hallway, takes a deep breath... and peeks to the right.

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There is nothing... out of the ordinary in the hall. The sounds seem to come from the kitchen...
ShadowNiL wrote:Ian: It's time to confront the maker of those sounds. Get the steel bar ready, and remember to go for the eyes!
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With his heart beating a mile a minute, Ian starts to walk towards the door. He thinks of going back to his room and wait until the day arrives... but it is too late to turn back now. Whatever is in there... he must confront it.

He is at the door now. He prepares his weapon...

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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 12:26
by Sublevel 114
Ian: open the door. Try to not die.
(and prepare to run if it is need)

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 15:29
by - ak -
If the monster looks gnarly and pathetic-looking (even if scary), try to beat and kill it.

If the monster has any sort of beastly form with hideous-looking teeth... RUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!!

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 15:33
by ShadowNiL
- ak - wrote:If the monster looks gnarly and pathetic-looking (even if scary), try to beat and kill it.

If the monster has any sort of beastly form with hideous-looking teeth... RUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN!!!!
GO FOR THE EYES IF DEADLY
INCAPACITATE IF NOT DEADLY

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:09
by Boingo
ShadowNiL wrote: and remember to go for the eyes!
And by using PastelForum logic the thing on the other side of the door probably doesn't have any eyes...

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:25
by Vortex
Sublevel 102 wrote:Ian: open the door. Try to not die.
(and prepare to run if it is need)
Ian slowly opens the door...

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His heart pounding very hard...

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And what is causing the noises is...
Boingo wrote:And by using PastelForum logic the thing on the other side of the door probably doesn't have any eyes...
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Just a wooden shutter! Creaking because of the wind outside!

All this trouble and it's just a shutter...!

Ian feels relieved... he knew he was being scared about a thing that doesn't exist.

Now he has nothing to fear.

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Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:29
by ENIHCAMBUS
Whats that thing?

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:29
by Boingo
HIT THE DANG THING IN THE EYES NOW PROD IT PROD IT WHACK IT AND RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!








This scene reminds me of those creepy films where the bad guy appears again after the protagonist thinks they're safe after a chase and says, "Hi there" really creepily.

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:31
by Boingo
Wait, what if it's a good guy?

ALSO: run to your old room.

Re: BEAST (forum story) - Prologue chapter

Posted: 07 May 2014 16:48
by gil2455526
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