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Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 08:34
by Vortex
okay, I can give you something...

In the beginning, it was just one;
then chaos arrived, and it was all pain.
Now they are four, asleep in the dark.
Only their memories inside remain.
Will you be the one to wake them up,
so that they can be united again?


(and yes, i completely suck at poetry, even more in a non native language. sorry for that XD)

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 11:23
by The Kakama
It seems okay, I don't know if Enihcambus will be happy with that.

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 13:05
by Vortex
huh? what?

it's meant to be a plot "teaser" from my story :P

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 13:08
by The Kakama
Oh, I didn't know. XD

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 19:16
by ENIHCAMBUS
The Kakama wrote:It seems okay, I don't know if Enihcambus will be happy with that.
It says "4", that doesn't makes me unhappy. :p

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 19:16
by Sublevel 114
nice poetry. :D
and cool teaser!

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 22:53
by Sublevel 114
Slender Man
Slender Man
you most certainly will die

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 05 Aug 2014 23:42
by The Kakama
I imagine singing that to the same tune as "jingle bells". :P

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 06 Aug 2014 08:10
by Vortex
in my case to the tune of spider man XD

Re: RANDOMNESS

Posted: 06 Aug 2014 22:53
by ENIHCAMBUS
OnyxIonVortex wrote:in my case to the tune of spider man XD
That makes more sence! XD