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Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 09 Feb 2014 07:09
by - ak -
And... I did.

8-)

Three chapters left to archive (4th, 5th, and 6th).

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 09 Feb 2014 09:47
by Sublevel 114
yay!

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 10 Feb 2014 09:50
by The Abacus
Another formatting error halfway through the first page of chapter 4:
AK wrote:COMMAND: ENER: Ask QUO about the AWARDS
The command isn't in quotes like the others.

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 11 Feb 2014 00:56
by - ak -
Thanks! Fixed.

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 11 Feb 2014 12:57
by The Abacus
I don't think this is an error, but in Chapter 4, page 3, somewhere near the bottom:
AK wrote:<MADDOX>

Ok, thanks. We should get back to finding that ORANGE BOX by getting through SECTION C to reach SECTION B.

Try to go through the southern door.
When I read this it doesn't make much sense as to why the last sentence would be phrased that way: shouldn't there be a, "We should," before, "Try to go through the southern door."? Or is this a mistake and someone else said it instead?

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 11 Feb 2014 16:13
by ThunderDasher
Hey, this "Forum-flash-game" is really fun! I just don't understand how to play it; we're supposed to post on the story thread, on this one, PM, or what? Or does someone delete the posts after actions are taken?

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 11 Feb 2014 16:22
by Sublevel 114
@ThunderDasher:
This awesome story was started on old forum. Author of story, AK+Soullock, moves all story to this new forum.
Right now we have six completed chapters and unfinished seventh. After AK successfully moves old chapters, we can continue the story.

Link to the last chapter. General Rules are at beginning of chapter, on the first page. :)
Let's wait when AK will finish his work, and then, someday, we can continue adventures!

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 12 Feb 2014 05:48
by - ak -
You post command.
Maybe I will make post to follow said commands :D

That's basically the gist of the rules of game, but please DO NOT POST ANYTHING in any Chapters as I am still adding stuffs to them.

Like what Sublevel said, the story is on hold and has been for quite a while. I still (and really still) plan on finishing the story when I come around doing it, preferably sometime after I finish archiving the rest of Chapters that we already played. At least, you get to see how the story plays out. But be warned about jumping straight into the unfinished 7th Chapter as you will miss some huge chunks of story laid out in Chapter 4, 5, and 6.

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 12 Feb 2014 14:34
by ThunderDasher
Oh, wait, that's Chapter 4 over there.

And the actual story is halted on Chapter 7. DAMN YOU, BRAIN. WHY DO YOU GET THINGS WRONG?

...Sorrr-y, thought that was the current story part. My bad.

Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)

Posted: 14 Feb 2014 04:57
by Sublevel 114