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Posted: **28 Jan 2014 00:58**

Wait.... those commands aren't all copy-pasted? You've manually reworded them?

Posted: **28 Jan 2014 01:01**

Ancient Crystal wrote:Wait.... those commands aren't all copy-pasted? You've manually reworded them?

Dunno, sometimes Copy-Pasting errors (Extra spaces) tend to appear on his posts.

Posted: **28 Jan 2014 01:04**

No, judging from his edit, it appears the error was elouf missing a line, not the grammar. Which makes a lot more sense.

Posted: **28 Jan 2014 05:40**

The commands are all copy and pasted, words for words as best I can make them out to be.

The dialogues are all my works, which are to be edited if needed.

Like the formatting thing with Elouf's lines that's my faults.

Posted: **28 Jan 2014 13:27**

I think I just found something else at the bottom of page 15, or am I seeing things?

AK wrote:Azareus
COMMAND: ENER: DO IT AGAIN!

Anteroinen
[img]COMMAND:%20ENER:%20NOTE%20that%20your%20NEW%20FRIENDS%20have%20yet%20to%20come%20out.[/img]

Posted: **28 Jan 2014 13:34**

I see it too.

Posted: **29 Jan 2014 00:33**

The Abacus wrote:I think I just found something else at the bottom of page 15, or am I seeing things?

AK wrote:Azareus
COMMAND: ENER: DO IT AGAIN!

Anteroinen
[img]COMMAND:%20ENER:%20NOTE%20that%20your%20NEW%20FRIENDS%20have%20yet%20to%20come%20out.[/img]

FIXED!

You're not seeing things. It is due to using wrong style. Used [ img ] instead of [ list ] in that case. Thanks!

Posted: **09 Feb 2014 00:23**

Again a few minor errors:

On page 13 when Ener, Maddox and Kelen climb up the ventilation (somewhere between the top and middle of the page):

AK wrote:
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COMMAND: Maddox: Go out to the LIGHT VOID and go near the cliff. Then try to look over the destroyed wall. Then, also, lie on the floor near the cliff, put your head upside down sticking out of the ground and try to look back. :mrgreen:
Sorry, but Maddox won't do that. It too long, too silly, and he already looks all over the place with Ener and they saw nothing. Better luck next time 8) 

On page 19, right before Ener destroys the waterfall (currently in the middle of the page):

AK wrote:COMMAND: MADDOX: Closely EXAMINE frozen waterfall and check INVENTORY to see if anything can break/cut through it  

Maddox won't go into the COLD ATMOSPHERE! He don't have the proper insulation against the extreme cold, so he lets Ener investigate instead. 

Hmmmm... 
Interesting, the waterfall is kinda transparent. Ener can see the other side of the FROZEN WATERFALL. He couldn't make out what it is... 
And Maddox decided to look at the INVENTORY.

Posted: **09 Feb 2014 05:40**

Thanks for the head-up! Both had been fixed.

Let's see if I can finish posting Chapter 3 before I sleep.

Posted: **09 Feb 2014 05:53**

Hope you can.

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