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Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 25 Apr 2013 01:21
by The Abacus
Are they the Cliffs from SNEE? :P
No, they're different cliffs. I was referring to the phrase "Up here, I am king,"
Regardless, very nice! :D
Thanks

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 26 Apr 2013 01:54
by Boingo
That's a beautiful poem.

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 30 May 2013 12:53
by The Abacus
Whispers in The Silent Forest
In the silent forest,
The wind does not whistle,
The birds do not sing,
For in the silent forest,
Nature is mute.

When there is no observer,
The trees begin to whisper,
What are they speaking? I wonder,
Are they communicating?

Whispering,
No more than quiet whistles,
Through the hollow cavities in the branches of trees…
What trees are these,
That whisper at will?
What trees are these,
That puzzle me with their mysteries?
Forever to baffle all who wonder,
Impossible to manifest,
A puzzle that will remain unsolved for eternity.
For the silent forest will remain,
Forever shrouded in the mist of ambiguity.
Originally written at the end of April (shortly after I posted the other one) and has since been edited

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 30 May 2013 12:58
by The Kakama
Nice piece of literature there. :)

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 30 May 2013 13:20
by The Abacus
Thanks :)

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 31 May 2013 04:38
by Rooster5man
Is it about the Cog Trees, or just general about life and trying to find quiet?

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 31 May 2013 09:43
by The Abacus
There is no specific inspiration – it's just a random idea, nothing more.

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 31 May 2013 13:41
by The Kakama
There is no specific inspiration – it's just a random idea, nothing more.
That's how all the good stuff came to be. :P

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 01 Jun 2013 00:03
by Rooster5man
Indeed, but I thought to ask :P

Re: Poetry Thread

Posted: 01 Jun 2013 20:58
by WorldisQuiet5256
In the events of stopping great acts of evil
Do we ourselves, become that great evil