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cool
overmachine is better XD

Nice intro.
(BTW, it should be called "Prologue", unless the misspelling was intentional.)

Not intentional, just a mistake.

I am here, yet I am not. I loop within my mind everywhere I go. I been to places that created people insane criminal serial killers. They became what they did when they learned and accepted the Truth. But when they returned from their Journey, knowing this truth, they thought to live their life with out Boarders, they tor it down. But when I came back, I took down the Boarders, but built a Floor.

Somewhere in the Milky Way Galaxy, there was a planet called "Daif", home of the "fuzzles", gorila like sentient creatures that lives in homes builded in the trees of their jungles. The trees in the jungles of Daif are from about 120 meters tall. The Fuzzles have lots of technological features, however, they are one of the less known sentient species in the Galaxy. They lived peacefully, but one day, the chaos invaded Daif, destroying all in the way. The fuzzles tried to protect themselves, and when it seemed that chaos was going back, the Bringer of Chaos created a small version of itself, and send it to Daif to help to destroy the fuzzles. When no hope was seen, the fuzzles scientists lauched a fuzzle baby to space with a message of help. The name of that fuzzle was:

"SURIGON"

Hmmmm...sounds like Star Wars or something else that is similar...
Nice job.

I like it

Good

So...anything?

Boingo wrote:So...anything?

Annoying -_-