A' L L U K I N - chapter 1

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• Use beastly vigor to launch across the ravine. Can it go that far?

Yep!











Maddox is understandably freaked out about the entire turn of events as the FUSE gently landed onto the floor.

Ener is quite pleased with the outcome :3

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Theta

• Woah man that's some awesome stuff right there
  Put the fuse in the thingy from before now :3

neurostatictoxin

• WOAHHHHHHHHHH WHUT.
  
  COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

The Great and Powerful ZombieShooter

• COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

  yES that
  
  Also if he David evil use the Welder on him

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• COMMAND: MADDOX: Replace the fuse and also ask him if he has seen "outside"

Maddox rather let Ener and his KEEN INSTINCTS do the works. And he would wait for the DOOR to be opened so they can have more detailed discussions in person.

• Also if he David evil use the Welder on him

Maddox is quite prepared for that. Trust him.

• Put the fuse in the thingy from before now :3

YES!

Ener walks over to the DOOR CONSOLE and insert the FRESH FUSE, replacing the old and useless BLOWN FUSE. Ener closed the PANEL and screw it back in place.







And it finally ready!

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The Great and Powerful ZombieShooter

• COMMAND:
  Maddox or Ener, whatever: Open door

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• COMMAND:
  Maddox or Ener, whatever: Open door

Ener pressed the OPEN BUTTON and await to greet and hopefully bites that jerk of Daniel.



and the DOOR slid open.





Now they're suddenly horrified.

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The Great and Powerful ZombieShooter

• something will be wrong with his under-the-torso area, I bet

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• something will be wrong with his under-the-torso area, I bet

Oh Ener and Maddox agreed that you have no idea...

<DANIEL>
Guys?

HEY GUYS?

You both looks like you just saw a horrifying monster.

















and so it begins...

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TheVoid

• that was awesome.
  ...
  They really should have kept that fuse, in my opinion.

Alamos.

• With the story at first i was like what?
  Then with the ravine i was like wat?
  Then with daniel i was like WAT.

Vurn

• Awesome!
  
  But he forgot the loaf!

( ak + soulllock )

• that was awesome.
  ...
  They really should have kept that fuse, in my opinion.

  Heh, thanks well, they couldn't keep the FUSE. They had to open that CORRIDOR DOOR so they can continue to explore the strange bunker place and the "middle of nowhere" too. Plus, they didn't expect to see Daniel looking like that despite his odd rudeness. We would response like that too if we're in the same situation 8)
  

  With the story at first i was like what?
  Then with the ravine i was like wat?
  Then with daniel i was like WAT.

  My mission is completed. Expect more of it to come.
  

  Awesome!
  
  But he forgot the loaf!

  That may or may not be important. You will find out.
  
  Thanks for the compliments, guys! I continue to welcome comments like this in next few days on this thread. This will be my last post until I post the link to the second chapter in near future.

Rooster

• WOOOOOOOOT, second chapter!!!!!

neurostatictoxin

• Awesome!
  But he forgot the loaf!

  That may or may not be important. You will find out.

  WAIT WHUT. What loaf?

RuloCore

• What's a loaf?

Rooster

• Loaf of bread...First image to the story....

RuloCore

• What bread? I don't remember seeing any bread.

Rooster

• "Oh, and don't forget to bring home a loaf." Read the first page.

RuloCore

• Yeah, but... where's the bread?

neurostatictoxin

• Ohh thanks Roost.

Yeah, but... where's the bread?

• I'd assume thats when they were first abducted. Assuming they were adducted lol.

Theta

• He ate it, what else would you do with a loaf of bread

TheVoid

• Heh, thanks well, they couldn't keep the FUSE. They had to open that CORRIDOR DOOR so they can continue to explore the strange bunker place and the "middle of nowhere" too. Plus, they didn't expect to see Daniel looking like that despite his odd rudeness. We would response like that too if we're in the same situation

  Take one of those pieces of scrap metal and put it in between the door way so it can't close, then take out that fuse. IT CAN FLY!

Alamos.

• More like he was doing groceries just before he was abducted.
  I bet at the end theres going to be an alt ending where you forget the bread and get in serious trouble.

YamiX

• That was just one of the best stories I've ever read on this FORUM! Wow, it.. it's amazing, really! It's so nice'cause the story involves you so much
  Although I hadn't participate of the story, it was like a comic book to me. Awesome!
  I just can't wait for chapter 2! And I'll participate too =)

( ak + soulllock )

• That was just one of the best stories I've ever read on this FORUM!

  and it just about to get better
  

  I just can't wait for chapter 2! And I'll participate too =)

  you don't have to wait any longer. Chapter 2 is just out
  
  -- CHAPTER 2 - of yawning void --

YamiX

• *freaks out* !!!

Rooster

• Ohh thanks Roost.
  
  No prob.
  
  *goes to read what he missed*

Smartguy5000

• OK guys, you know to keep chat in the chat thread.
  Closing this cause it's over for now.

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