🛡 Guardians of the Pastel Universe 🛡

[The Kakama]

It seems okay to me, so I guess so.

[The Abacus]

Do I have good grammar? I always wondered...
I think it's acceptable, but I can't judge myself without some bias so...

Yes, you have good grammar and I rarely see you make mistakes.

(although here's an example:)

The woman's face suddenly shows a sad expression as she mentions that last word. Ian wonders if something has happened to his son...

[Vortex]

Thanks
(and yeah, that was just me not paying much attention, sorry )

[ENIHCAMBUS]

SUBCEPTION, PART 3: ONIONLAND

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Sublevel: ...vortex?...vortex???...Vortex what happened to you?
Vortex: Where I am?
Redafro: In some place known as "Onionland".
Vortex: Onionland, I remember this place, one of my worst nightmares, as far I remember, here I am...an...
Kakama: Blue Glowing ONION!

Vortex realizes he is an onion.

Vortex: No, no, not again, please not this thing, how I hate this, I want to awake please!
Redafro: Don't worry, we are here to help you to awake, to only thing we have to do is to find the Core of your dreams, you have to awake a few time more so we can find a better dream to find the Core.
Vortex: Unfortunately for you, I can't awake from this dream, I'm stuck with the onions, sorry.
Kakama: So, our only way is to find the Core within Onionland.
Sublevel: And thats bad? I mean, they are just all onions, nothing to fear at all.
Kakama: What about OIV+? This place must be infected with it all.
Sublevel: Oh yeah, I forgot about OIV+, I now horrified!
Redafro: Exactly, how to find the Core?
Vortex: We have to go trough Oniontown, then cross the Forest of Bulbs, and then go to the Lair of the drips, thats the Core of Onionland.
Sublevel: Well, we have a new adventure!
Kakama:

At Oniontown

Sublevel: This place is skewed with onion vendors everywhere, and everything is made with onions.
Vortex: Sniff... Sniff.
Kakama: Where is Red?
Sublevel: Oh no, he was caught by a vendor!
Vortex: No Red!
Redafro: What? I just bought an onion, I'm hungry. *Redafro eats the onion*
Vortex: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
*Redafro contracts OIV+ and becomes an onion with red afro*
Redafro: Wow, I'm onions dudes!
Vortex: Aren't you horrified?
Redafro: I have been in many dreams, I have adept to transmigrations and transmutations.
Vortex: Lucky you!
Sublevel: Better exit this damn place!
Kakama: Right!

At the Forest of Bulbs

Kakama: I think I like the look of this forest, maybe I'll make a drawing of it when we awake.
Vortex: I must tell you that this forest has a mighty guardian, it will not stop we are all infected with OIV+!
Sublevel: Don't worry I'm well pre...
*A mysterious entity takes Sublevel for surprise, and forces him to drink...
...onion juice!*
???: Hahahaha!!!
Sublevel: I don't fell so good. *Sublevel becomes a fire onion with bunny ears*
Kakama: Who are you?
???: I'm Revefyadnus, mighty guardian of the Forest of the Bulbs, and career of the Onion Juice! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
Sublevel: How you dare to convert me into onion!
Kakama: Onionlevel doesn't sounds to good, I prefer Potatolevel.
Sublevel: ¬¬
Redafro: I'm trying to use my powers againts her, but the don't work.
Sublevel: Let me try. *Sublevel tries to explode, but he fails* I can't use my powers too, what happening.
Vortex: Onions have layers, and those layers are keeping our powers, its sad, I know.
Revefyadnus: Only one is left.
*Revefyadnus forces Kakama to drink onion juice, but something is wrong*
Kakama: I think you forgot something. I'm a ROBOT!
*Kakama grabs Revefyadnus and with the powers of the mask of speed he spins realy fast to launch her to the horizon*
Kakama: Problem solved!
Sublevel: Thanks Kakama!
Redafro: Now only the Lair of the Drips is left!

At the Lair of the Drips

Vortex:
Sublevel:
Kakama:
Redafro:
Sublevel: Whats happening?
Vortex: Its the Lair of the Drips, at the top there is a huge blade that cuts onions and spreads all the smell through all the land.
Kakama: How sad!
Redafro: I think I saw someone in the top of the lair!
Vortex: Yeah, the lair is property of the Onich, to reach the Core we have to defeat her.
*Suddenly, a gruop of onion guards surround the heroes, and the Onich magically appears in front of them*
Onich: What do you want?
Redafro: We want to reach the Core so we can exit this place!
Onich: I wouldn't let you get trough my lair, you will be infected first!
Kakama: Hahaha... I'm a robot!
*The Onich casts a spell and converts Kakama directly into a robotic onion with the mask of speed*
Onich: HAHAHAHAHAHA... Now there's nothing you could do!
Kakama: Do you think? Alike my friends, my powers doesn't came from inside, they come from my mask, and while I have my mask on, I will still get my powers.
Onich: Haha... Really?
*Kakama starts to use his supersonic speed power to bash all the onion guards*
Onich: No, How you could!?
Kakama: Now its your turn!
*Kakama start to spin really fast next to Onich, creating a devesting tornado that rips all of her layers*
Onich: OMG, I'm nude!
Sublevel:
Redafro:
Vortex:
Kakama: Now what will you do?
Onich: I'll thank you, I always wanted to by in the pornion magazine, and thanks to you I can finally fullfill my dream, I will let you go to the Core!
Sublevel: Yay!

At the Core

Vortex: Finally, my inception came to an end!
Sublevel: We can finally outside this place!

*Vortex awakes*

Vortex: Did I awake?
Fine: My mom wants to see you now!
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To be continued in "Subception, Part 4: The Blast Door"

[The Kakama]

Wow, this is really epic.

[Vortex]

Nice update!

To be continued in "Subception, Part 4: The Blast Door"

is that what I'm thinking?

[Sublevel 114]

yay! ^^

[bender]

Grammatical mistakes make it extra funny

[Vortex]

hahaha

[ENIHCAMBUS]

Wow, thanks guys!