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[Ancient Crystal]

Possible.... I thought Foer's behaviour was a manifestation of the alienation resulting from the incident with Tey'ri. (Always in sight, never in reach)

[- ak -]

Possible.... I thought Foer's behaviour was a manifestation of the alienation resulting from the incident with Tey'ri. (Always in sight, never in reach)

Can you explain what you meant? I am having a hard time understanding this.

I'd thought because Ener got more flashbacks involving Foer earlier in the story (like the loaf thing) it seemed like there was this incident involving him (and probably his death) earlier then Teyri's.

Good observation. That's possible.

[Ancient Crystal]

Possible.... I thought Foer's behaviour was a manifestation of the alienation resulting from the incident with Tey'ri. (Always in sight, never in reach)

Can you explain what you meant? I am having a hard time understanding this.

Alright, I'll try again.

Tey'ri's hauntings seem pretty consistent with someone who's died. She appears, get's covered in blood goes away.

Foer, on the other hand, is different. Whenever he haunts Ener, he keeps in sight, letting himself be chased, but continues to slip farther away.
To me, this would not imply death, as much it would imply alienation. Foer is there, but out of Ener's reach.

Furthermore, I say it's not much of a stretch to assume this is the result of the same horrific act that got Ener banished. Or that this act was somehow directed at Tey'ri.

[- ak -]

Possible.... I thought Foer's behaviour was a manifestation of the alienation resulting from the incident with Tey'ri. (Always in sight, never in reach)

Can you explain what you meant? I am having a hard time understanding this.

Alright, I'll try again.

Tey'ri's hauntings seem pretty consistent with someone who's died. She appears, get's covered in blood goes away.

Foer, on the other hand, is different. Whenever he haunts Ener, he keeps in sight, letting himself be chased, but continues to slip farther away.
To me, this would not imply death, as much it would imply alienation. Foer is there, but out of Ener's reach.

Furthermore, I say it's not much of a stretch to assume this is the result of the same horrific act that got Ener banished. Or that this act was somehow directed at Tey'ri.

Good and valid theory.

Even if Foer is actually dead (confirmed in Chapter 5 & 6).

[The Abacus]

Several formatting mistakes:

• - Name of user not in bold
  
  - Third command incorrectly quoted with information not intended to be part of the command
  
  - Command not quoted

(BROKEN LINKS! I left the texts alone and removed the links instead. - admin)

[Sublevel 114]

wait....
AK, I'm sorry, but you forget to move some of phrases in sequences.
Look at this post:

(BROKEN LINKS! - admin)

I CLEARLY remember that it ended with Ener's quote
"NEVER
AGAIN "

[The Abacus]

I remember that too actually.

More minor mistakes:

• - Command not in quotes
  - Second command not in quotes
  - Is "opened" meant to be spelled incorrectly?

(BROKEN LINKS! Texts left alone, though! - admin)

[- ak -]

- Is "opened" meant to be spelt incorrectly?

Yep! Sometime it spelled like that for purpose of animal's strange obsessions with misspelling with wrong vowel or skipping a vowel altogether.

It happens in the story sometime with OPAN (open) and WEPON (weapon).

[ThunderDasher]

Diamonds posts off-topic in archive thread.

I warn him about it, and ask Ener to BEASTLY VIGOR us outta there for funny effect.

-ak- says nay.

y u no draw Ener BEASTLY VIGORing us out, at least on this thread

(NOT TO SELF: Ask for a pic with Ener bashing off-topic'ers away so it gets posted here every time someone posts on the archive threads)

[Diamonds]

Diamonds posts off-topic in archive thread.

I warn him about it, and ask Ener to BEASTLY VIGOR us outta there for funny effect.

-ak- says nay.

y u no draw Ener BEASTLY VIGORing us out, at least on this thread

(NOT TO SELF: Ask for a pic with Ener bashing off-topic'ers away so it gets posted here every time someone posts on the archive threads)

i realized my error ("this looks familiar...") and tried deleting but you had posted your warning before i clicked the x button. all clear now.