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And... I did.
Three chapters left to archive (4th, 5th, and 6th).
Three chapters left to archive (4th, 5th, and 6th).
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Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)
Another formatting error halfway through the first page of chapter 4:
The command isn't in quotes like the others.AK wrote:COMMAND: ENER: Ask QUO about the AWARDS
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Thanks! Fixed.
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Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)
I don't think this is an error, but in Chapter 4, page 3, somewhere near the bottom:
When I read this it doesn't make much sense as to why the last sentence would be phrased that way: shouldn't there be a, "We should," before, "Try to go through the southern door."? Or is this a mistake and someone else said it instead?AK wrote:<MADDOX>
Ok, thanks. We should get back to finding that ORANGE BOX by getting through SECTION C to reach SECTION B.
Try to go through the southern door.
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Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)
Hey, this "Forum-flash-game" is really fun! I just don't understand how to play it; we're supposed to post on the story thread, on this one, PM, or what? Or does someone delete the posts after actions are taken?
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NOT CHANGING THIS SIG UNTIL SUBMACHINE: THE FARM COMES OUT, which is never :/
NOT CHANGING THIS SIG UNTIL SUBMACHINE: THE FARM COMES OUT, which is never :/
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Re: A' L L U K I N - forum story discussion - by (- ak -)
@ThunderDasher:
This awesome story was started on old forum. Author of story, AK+Soullock, moves all story to this new forum.
Right now we have six completed chapters and unfinished seventh. After AK successfully moves old chapters, we can continue the story.
Link to the last chapter. General Rules are at beginning of chapter, on the first page. :)
Let's wait when AK will finish his work, and then, someday, we can continue adventures!
This awesome story was started on old forum. Author of story, AK+Soullock, moves all story to this new forum.
Right now we have six completed chapters and unfinished seventh. After AK successfully moves old chapters, we can continue the story.
Link to the last chapter. General Rules are at beginning of chapter, on the first page. :)
Let's wait when AK will finish his work, and then, someday, we can continue adventures!
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You post command.
Maybe I will make post to follow said commands
That's basically the gist of the rules of game, but please DO NOT POST ANYTHING in any Chapters as I am still adding stuffs to them.
Like what Sublevel said, the story is on hold and has been for quite a while. I still (and really still) plan on finishing the story when I come around doing it, preferably sometime after I finish archiving the rest of Chapters that we already played. At least, you get to see how the story plays out. But be warned about jumping straight into the unfinished 7th Chapter as you will miss some huge chunks of story laid out in Chapter 4, 5, and 6.
Maybe I will make post to follow said commands
That's basically the gist of the rules of game, but please DO NOT POST ANYTHING in any Chapters as I am still adding stuffs to them.
Like what Sublevel said, the story is on hold and has been for quite a while. I still (and really still) plan on finishing the story when I come around doing it, preferably sometime after I finish archiving the rest of Chapters that we already played. At least, you get to see how the story plays out. But be warned about jumping straight into the unfinished 7th Chapter as you will miss some huge chunks of story laid out in Chapter 4, 5, and 6.
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Oh, wait, that's Chapter 4 over there.
And the actual story is halted on Chapter 7. DAMN YOU, BRAIN. WHY DO YOU GET THINGS WRONG?
...Sorrr-y, thought that was the current story part. My bad.
And the actual story is halted on Chapter 7. DAMN YOU, BRAIN. WHY DO YOU GET THINGS WRONG?
...Sorrr-y, thought that was the current story part. My bad.
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