A story on paper:60

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All of them go in and view the surroundings.
The four of you enter:
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@Kakama: How many chapters are you going to release? :)
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Well...I expect he's going to develop the storyline throughout this story and with the information we have, It's not very much. I would think it fair to say this will go on for quite a bit. (Goody :mrgreen: )
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Split into two groups: Snarr and Taruka go along the catwalk and take a look around, the others take a good look down at the carnage, as well as check for any other rooms except for the one across the catwalk. Then catch up. Then talk about findings.
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@Kakama: How many chapters are you going to release? :)
I don't know, actually. I already got the basic storyline for chapter 4 and 5, and maybe chapter 6.
Like Boingo said, as long as it takes to develop the storyline all the way through.
Split into two groups: Snarr and Taruka go along the catwalk and take a look around, the others take a good look down at the carnage, as well as check for any other rooms except for the one across the catwalk. Then catch up. Then talk about findings.
Snarr and Taruka walk along the catwalk to the next room. They take a look around and see this:
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On their left is a large elevator, and on their right is a large metal door behind a soldier.
Meanwhile, you and Traskarz don't find any other rooms except for the one across the catwalk. You look over the railing to see what's happening:
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You don't see any carnage, but you see some war machines and soldiers below heading towards the opening in the wall.
Then you and Traskarz walk towards Snarr and Taruka.
Snarr: Anything new back there?
Traskarz: No, no other rooms back there.
60: How about you ?
Taruka: There's that large door that's obviously locked, and that small door in front that's also locked. So, apart from this room, nothing much.
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60: Ask Taruka where the door the soldier is guarding goes, if he doesn't know then ask the soldier where that door leads to.
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60: Ask Taruka where the door the soldier is guarding goes, if he doesn't know then ask the soldier where that door leads to.
60:Where does the door the soldier is guarding lead to?
Taruka: Probably a storage area. Those rails on the floor are to make it easier to transport carts and the like.
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(No commands?)
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i would post commands, but im to lazy to read 70 pages and catch up on story line
do you even tree
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Go through one of the doors.
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