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Re: Drawings

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Awesome.
I'm not good at critique.
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Re: Drawings

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I am :D

The point of view is very nice and the use of colors as light is neat.

One thing that really needs some work is the appropriate balance of shading because everything feels quite flat and lacks depth.

Sure you might say it is during nighttime, but even nighttime still possess the atmosphere of lighting. I think the interior (the foreground) should be the darkest since I don't see any nearby light source. Since the city itself is bathed in light (even not that much), it should be the brightest. The background of the night sky should be the second darkest with perhaps a darker shade of gray.

Maybe add more colors somewhere, maybe not. Shading is one area that need to be revised the most.
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Ah, I see your point. ;)
Thanks for the advice, could really use it next time I'm doing a drawing of a place at night. :)
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Kakama, is that supposed to be from Batman/Batman Beyond? It really seems familiar.
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No, it's not.
I'm not a fan of those kinds of things.
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Oh, well...*shuts up* XD
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Re: Drawings

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The Abacus wrote:Now, I think I'll draw a nuke blast for contrast.
Scanning didn't seem to have gone so well, here are photographs instead:
Sketch_2.jpg
Some other drawings:
(I drew these a while ago – one I drew a month ago. There is one that I have yet to finish too)
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Another drawing that I wanted to upload, but couldn't due to file attachment limit:
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Something Else (this is the one I drew a month ago)
Something Else (this is the one I drew a month ago)
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first picture: my work
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Re: Drawings

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Another drawing that I wanted to upload, but couldn't due to file attachment limit:
Ha, nice good idea there. :)
first picture: my work
I don't see anything. :|
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